BrokenOath
Shameless review by the Author!! So this is a project I've worked for over a year and it's starting now. It just feel like this is as good a time as any other. (Plus, I love Halloween). So, about the book, I hope you read it and enjoy it!! The beguining will be messy, and light novel-esque, then it'll shift to a huge growth of characters over chapter 50 or so and will rise in intensity until chapter 250... then, I dunno, I'm still figuring it out!! Hope you like it, leave you comments!!
This is a beginning of a good story that i had hoped to see more with the Zerg from Starcraft 2. With the Prologue i have some problems I dont think a lord Captain or lord High Captain has security clearance of rear Admiral has ship that is faster than light, can Orbital Bombard a hive City(!!!!) before they can activate there void shields and command the Imperial Guard. The biomass convergence is a little wacki a dozen tree, two birds, 8 stone insects for tail and two more eyes? If dont drop the story like 95 percent of the other writers of similare storys then you will have my power stone.
yep, pretty sure it's dead. shame. been looking for a good tyranid fanfic for ages, but the vast majority of them are just bad, and of the few that are actually good, only like one or two ever got finished. if this keeps up, i think i'll soon start to not even read the stories before checking how old they are and if they got finished. saves me a bit of disappointment at least.