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Allivonk
AllivonkLv2Allivonk

There were a few grammar mistakes, but none of those really matter! Your story is very captivating and draws you in. You immediately start to see through the eyes of Edward and Alexander. I really like the way that you introduce the setting and describe the scenery and atmosphere! I think if you maybe put in a bit more about what Alex is feeling or looking like (cringing or like smirking) it would be even more amazing than it already is! Damn though, I'm really excited for the next chapter :O [img=recommend][img=update]

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Nacho4U
Nacho4ULv2Nacho4U

this book is no longer being, please check my new and improved version of the book instead! :)

Allivonk
AllivonkLv2Allivonk

The dialogue is getting better and better and I love how the story is picking up! I can't wait to read more [img=recommend] My favourite thing will always be the way you describe the setting of the story.