BlindBandit
Well... That's scary. I... am not into Horror much. "The Secret of Crickley Hall" was the only book I read that belonged to the horror genre. Now, it's this one. I love the creeps and chills it's plot gives. And the worst part is, I sleep besides the window and open it occasionally because I like the fresh air and sky and scenery. Now, I guess, I won't be opening it, hehehe, kidding. Your plot is gripping, so is the name of the book. I am hoping there will be some love story in between... Will be adding this book into my collection then. And please, update according to the schedule you wrote above.
I haven't read horror in a while, this was a nice return to it! First off, I really like the interactions between Oliver and Noah, they're both enjoyable and pretty realistic characters. The description of the horror stalking Noah gave me a vivid, creepy image in my head--which means the author succeeded! I like where this is going and definitely will be waiting to see what comes next.
This novel is not-your-ordinary-and-typical HORROR story!! This is perfectly narrated! Once you started reading, you can never get enough of this. When you read the first chapters, it will give you the chills. The chills will hype up as the chapter continues until you felt numb with scariness as you read.
First of all thank you author for the nightmare I'll have tonight. Now since this work has only one chapter rn so there's limited information but for the first I'm getting a feeling that this work is going to be superb especially from the synopsis that make you imagine few things. I do sleep with my window open to get some cold pleasant air which now I believe I won't be opening till I forget this. By reading the first chapter and synopsis I can definitely say that this work will really horrify you and give you some goosebumps. Lastly I'll say the author to update it more and to keep his word to update it atleast 3 times a week, I will definitely read it once I get used to what I read today.
The style of writing is simply good, neat and quite good written. First, the premise is good, intriguing synopsis and good first chapter, it could be personal, I think you can find better cover. The interaction between characters is interesting and good written, the description is pretty solid as one could feel the atmosphere in the story. Overall, good read. Good luck.
I was only able to read the first chapter, but the base for the story is promising. The banter between the friends is relatable, and their dialogue flows well, which, to me; is a good sign for future chapters. The bus Scene is đą(I wonât say more because then itâll be a spoilerđ).There were a few present and past tense inconsistencies, but no grammatical errors or such that I found. All in all: both the work and author show high potential. Keep it going Author!â¤ď¸