LexLexter
its not a bad story but the mc needs work, unless the kid was raised in a cave there is no way he could be this nieve. just exposure to TV and the internet, their is no way he would be this stupid. I can't imagine what will happen if he finds a semi tech civilization, he will be dead and the jumper will be taken. he tells everything. also I would suggest tagging it with star gate.
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