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It has a military sergeant grade type of context, as soon as i began to read it, i can feel the determination of the mc, if you read it guys you will know hahaha,,, this thing makes my mind burst with imagination to begin with, ireally like how detailed the story is, but the world, it needs more worlddd!!!! đ I got no complain to the context, and the very emotions and feelings i got from it is splendid, Congrats here is a vote for me đđ
For some reason, I just don't feel this novel is meant to be novel. I have read you awkward gentleman and that was somewhat felt complicated, like in a way which I should call it a novel or something else, but for this one, I can say, it just didn't mean to be a novel, the world background and the way characters are placed are so freaking good, that one thing for sure, but the connectivity feels somewhat like a graphic novel that the actual, and the fact you use very mannered vocabulary gives away the thing it isn't a novel type thingy, no dumb talk, no lame fanservice but rather the story heavily focus on development, which is very usual in comic/manga world where they have to make story developing along with hype for next chapters. I can't say I'm impressed but when I look at this it reminds me of Berserk, the manga, not that this is in the least dark as that thing but Guts and this story MC felt pretty similar. My point is: this is not quite a novel, but still the plots rocks, writer completely focus on his worldbuilding and what characters are going through. Yes, there's a lot of grammar problems but also it improves with each chapter. I say good luck and keep doing what you love! đ
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