yana_lili
So far so good š the world building needs some work but itās ok Iāve seen worse. The grammar and structure of sentences needs some help but I donāt know if english is your first language if not then understandable why the grammar a little wonky. Your putting of commas and qutation needs some work as well. Overall this book have potential its a diamond in the rough and needs polishing to make it a good book thats unforgettableš Oh the synopsis also needs to give us a clear understanding of what we are going to read so I advise you to fix the synopsis to help the readers better understand what there going to read. The picture if you want to know is made by @Flower_poya (thatās her insta) so if you want her to make a cover there you go her info. Iāll give a 4.5 rating since I see a lot of potential for this book you just need some advice and guidance to get thereš Ok im done yaāll I hope you update more since do really like this storyšš½