Reviews of Waking in another World

Well, since I can't really give myself a bad score, although, I know there are many mistakes in my writing style and everything is kinda jumbled, I think, my story will be quite good to read, I'm open for your criticism, so if you find something, that needs improvements, leave a review, or a comment will also do the job. As for the story, I have many things I think about when I lay in bed, many stories, that formed over time, and, this is a mix of many of them, placed in a world, that is whole, makes sense, and is worth writing. I have many other ideas I would love to write about, but, I don't have the time for that, alone 1 chap of this takes me up to 3 hours to write, and there are many mistakes inside, so I need to learn more about editing. I try to embellish the things around the world as much as possible because I believe that that is the core for imagining the story in the way, that I do. After all, I want you to move along with me, in this world, not just create parts of a random world, where things happen. If you want to be an editor, just leave me a comment, I'd be glad to have one!

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Stories pretty good so far from what I read hopefully you updated more so I can read more of it cuz right now the character seems pretty good but it's only been a couple chapter so I'm not really sure but I like it so far

really good story , interesting characters , unique abilities , intriguing plot and immersive world , only thing missing is at least a weekly update , i also heard that the author is very creative , intelligent and a talented writer

" starts getting the shakes and eye twitches like a crack addict " i need new chapters to read , this novel is really good , please man , i need my fix , at least once a week , i'm begging you , " hands are very shaky " . Seriously though this is a well thought story with depth a good plot , interesting scenarios , good organic flow and likeable themes

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