ayaneisme
Hello to this friendly author. I really liked how you caught my attention in the first chapter. It had already sown enough intrigue for you to proceed to the next chapters. You also included a bit of history of your world and I also like the way the author made her narrations. Not awkward at all and the description and tenses are on point. You deserve your contract, girl :)
I am very interested in the book and will definitely be giving this a full read. It feels like I am reading an actual hard cover book with the great detail and smooth story telling. I love everything so far, the pace feels really good. (which is something I need to learn) I must say I really am looking forward to the story.