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First of all I think that the writing quality is very good, when I read the book I donβt have any trouble understanding what the author is trying to write and the grammar is good. Iβm taking one star away for stability of updates because author doesnβt post much, but when they do itβs always good so not much of a problem. Otherwise, everything is pretty good! Characters, world, and story are all well written. I would prefer if the story was slightly slower, because I just like reading those books, but the pace is already very good. Overall a good book and would recommend reading Ps sorry for the long review, just kinda thought this would help maybe brighten authors day a bit, bc as another author I know the feeling of lack of motivation.
now that RWBY volume 9 is out are you going to resume the book or are you still going to continue to hiatus because I really like this book I think it's π and the best part about it is that it's a Yuri RWBY which is very rare and some of the books that make them end up just flopping at the middle of it but hey man if you need to take your time do what you got to do man we'll still be here rooting for you do you best of my life be good with you
Great Novel the only problem was in the early chaps were they don't even bother to ask about her strange eyes. Although some of them noticed but I have a case of strange OCD wherein I love details of the Main Characters so maybe its just me. So any reader who gets mad at me for this go **** yourself this is my opinion. Great Novel Author-san please continue more.
A really fun and highly enjoyable story, I definitely like the main character and some of the mystery involved with her you find out and some of the later chapters. The main character as well rounded, and the characters around her are well written and well rounded as well. This is definitely a fun story to check out .
Great bit of power fantasy with yuri.... so yeah Iβm totally in and completely biased. Beyond that it seems the author is willing to have our MC work to attain power which I enjoy. Just some minor gripes on writing quality like wrond word usage and grammar errors but nothing too egregious. Thanks for this interesting story and hope you continue to write this to what ever end you have imagined.