I like it 👌. I is very refreshing to get this type of story that seems to develop the main character inside and outside of the game world. Tho there are minor plot holes, like how they can game through the night without sleep. Which everyone basically does with the games time constraints. But still much better and has a lot more thought init then many stories on this platform.
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