if only there wasn't harem i would rate this 5 stars .................................................................
Such a cool story man.
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I hope more comes out soon. Still Krshzvxgjkdhzjstjldgjldgjldtjstsfjzdhkkztilxtiosrkhrerruohltsidyidyodyo dsyosyosyodyohjeudgfyygggjgfj
he balance between original and yours is really something. Are you don't know how to get your own MC plots?? Then you just slip him in original plot?? π¦π¦π¦ Hope next chap will be your MC true plot star, cause i like the original novel and the girls description ππ
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keren ceritanya tapi sulit banget dia dapat poin yahh semoga dia bisa dapat saitama karena saitama pilihan paling tepat untuk saat ini,.....................
Well let me teel you this story setting can have a lot of potential but.... That author wrote it like a kid. I mean come on man what bull**** story progression u have. You are just trying to make scenarios with the canon. Nothing new and that too mc just does mindless things.
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Worth reading.... but.. in my opinion the MC is too much tsundere ... and the skill lacks more detailed explaination... like that void dragon skill blah blah... ervery ability he does just pop out of chapters ... he can transforn into or form too?? Where did that came from? ..... the rest like plot is enough skill 4 a newbie...
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Still no new chapters ππππππππππππππππππππππ’π’π’π’π’π’π’π’π’π’π’π’π’π’π’π’π’π’π’π¨π¨π¨π¨π¨π¨π¨π¨π¨π¨π¨π¨π¨π΄π¨π¨π¨π¨π¨π¨π΄π΄π΄π΄π΄π΄π΄π΄π΄π΄π΄π΄π΄π΄π΄π΄π΄π΄π΄π΄
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Still no updates after so long???π―π―π―ππππ’π’π’ Must be a dead novel huh?π£π£π£π£π£π£π£π£π£π£π£π£π£π£π£π£π£π£π£π£π£π£π£π£π£π₯π₯π₯π₯π₯π₯π₯π₯π₯π₯π₯π₯π₯π¦π¦π¦π¦π¦π¦π¦π¦π¦π¦π¦π¦π¦π¦π¦π¦π¦π¦π¦π¦π©π©π©π©π©π©π©π©π©π©π©π©π©π©π©π©π©π©π©π©
Amazing idea for story and the development for the story is perfect. I think that if you add some difficulties in the fighting will be perfect and some update for the MC in each 2 chapters Iam waiting for the nxt chπ€©π€©