GudBrown
This story is aimed for the younger readers, but it's a fanfic of the Game of thrones, so M.C has to be a bit more cruel. Like seriously. It won't make any sense if his mentality stays the same as a kid from earth, specially since he has seen the cruelty of that world. Why is the title 'kingslayer', bad.? He cares about a fuckin' title so much that he can see his own mother being violated.? That was just one of the examples. Shouldn't have chosen the game of thrones if there were going to be that many timeskips. The action scenes are not as detail as you would expect from a game of thrones fanfic either.!
i was excited to read this fanfic, but was a little disappointed, it is not that bad, but i found that the story was too rushed and fast paced, plus the writing was a little childish. i read the fanfic that inspired you, and it was one of the best, so maybe it influenced me into having too high of an expectation to your story, but i believe that you will continue improving as you write so don't give up.
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Oof finally found something different to read, with all those naruto-one piece types it was too much. Never thought i would find a GOT fanfic, thank you for writing this. Liked the character you have choosen to be the MC. So far too good. Will you add gore and other (*wink wink) elements? Please make it 2 chaps a day and dont drop. Thanks againπ»π»π»
whats there not to like ........ so far so good im loving the got theme too good ...... this can go many ways i look forward to reading more but plllllllllllleeeeeeeease author-kun release more for my valerian steel saber is again again again again again again again again again again again again again again again again again again again again again again again again again again again again again again again unable to endure the thirst for more!
I've only read 6 chapters so far, but i can already tell its going to be a good story. Author, please don't drop this. You might not get a lot of people in the first few days to couple weeks, but with a story that's really good so far, they will flock to it soon enough. Also, don't forget to Incorporate the classic george rr martin story telling style. Dont want the mc to have it too easy.
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