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Reviews of Viserys Targaryen with a system (SI)

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Viserys Targaryen with a system (SI)

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Iehdfdttwkhyd
IehdfdttwkhydLv2Iehdfdttwkhyd

5 star for me but could you please somehow turn it to a harem it's game of thrones after all MC already stated that he will have a harem (don't want an ****** we have Jamie and Cersei for that part 😏). Can't wait for Tyrion Lannister to appear 😑😎

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_EMI_
_EMI_Lv4_EMI_

This story is aimed for the younger readers, but it's a fanfic of the Game of thrones, so M.C has to be a bit more cruel. Like seriously. It won't make any sense if his mentality stays the same as a kid from earth, specially since he has seen the cruelty of that world. Why is the title 'kingslayer', bad.? He cares about a fuckin' title so much that he can see his own mother being violated.? That was just one of the examples. Shouldn't have chosen the game of thrones if there were going to be that many timeskips. The action scenes are not as detail as you would expect from a game of thrones fanfic either.!

SlyMonster
SlyMonsterLv6SlyMonster

This feels more like a draft than anything else. The action is rushed, worldbuilding too fast, and the time skip too brutal. I advise to scrap it and redo it properly

Kovacs06
Kovacs06Lv4Kovacs06

I'm a fan of GOT so i really like this novel MC is op but that's ok. I wish you could make your chapter release 2/day if you can't it is ok as long as there's a release I'll vote for this novel everyday πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘

Chick_Thief
Chick_ThiefLv12Chick_Thief

This story is cool so continue. Game of Thrones in fanfiction is cool and as an author you do a good job and there is a good development for the story so continue

Darksom
DarksomLv4Darksom

Sorry to inform all of you readers that the author have passed away. I will be the first to miss him. Our prayers are with you and your family. Thanks again for your work.😢

Xenoblubber
XenoblubberLv4Xenoblubber

Reveal spoiler

SPECTRALE
SPECTRALELv5SPECTRALE

i was excited to read this fanfic, but was a little disappointed, it is not that bad, but i found that the story was too rushed and fast paced, plus the writing was a little childish. i read the fanfic that inspired you, and it was one of the best, so maybe it influenced me into having too high of an expectation to your story, but i believe that you will continue improving as you write so don't give up.

yahska
yahskaLv6yahska

Great fanfiction. The mc is as op as a normal human can be (only thing magical about him is that he can use dragon fire) and i like it. Hope it's not dropped. .........................................................................................................

YoungestKing
YoungestKingLv11YoungestKing

This is beautiful.... pls dont stop writing because it is truly oh too beautiful. pls also as a suggestion he should have planted his own spies over the last few years in Westeros including the tyrells

D1vineMonarch
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Dr_Absent_Minded
Dr_Absent_MindedLv13Dr_Absent_Minded

Any chance you will not drop this one and continue any chance there will be a continuous wave of chapters you intent to publish anyway like your fanfic pls keep it up πŸ‘ŒπŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘

The_Preto
The_PretoLv5The_Preto

Perfect Game of Thrones fan-ficion, i read like a madman and now can wait for more realeses. The timing, MC and system are perfect congrats to author.

MaDU
MaDULv10MaDU

Oof finally found something different to read, with all those naruto-one piece types it was too much. Never thought i would find a GOT fanfic, thank you for writing this. Liked the character you have choosen to be the MC. So far too good. Will you add gore and other (*wink wink) elements? Please make it 2 chaps a day and dont drop. Thanks againπŸ‘»πŸ‘»πŸ‘»

ooKIng01
ooKIng01Lv5ooKIng01

The story has been great, so far. If you are looking a good read then i would recommend this. It doesn't feel forced and the mc is within the bounds of being a system mc. would recommend, 4.2 if only because there are not that many chapters yet.

Dragonrage7
Dragonrage7Lv13Dragonrage7

I πŸ’• this βœοΈβœοΈβœοΈβœοΈβœοΈβœοΈβœοΈβœοΈβœοΈβœοΈπŸ‘‘πŸ‘‘πŸ‘‘πŸ‘‘πŸ‘‘πŸ‘‘πŸ‘‘πŸ‘‘πŸ‘‘πŸ‘‘πŸ‘‘πŸ‘‘πŸ’―βš‘οΈβš‘οΈπŸ’―πŸ’―πŸ’―πŸ’―πŸ’―supports keep writing I love how the mc is op some characters in game of thrones need some face slapping

ValkoWolf
ValkoWolfLv14ValkoWolf

whats there not to like ........ so far so good im loving the got theme too good ...... this can go many ways i look forward to reading more but plllllllllllleeeeeeeease author-kun release more for my valerian steel saber is again again again again again again again again again again again again again again again again again again again again again again again again again again again again again again again unable to endure the thirst for more!

Cabul
CabulLv4Cabul

Game of Thrones? And the Harem too? *nodded* You deserve 5 stars from me! ________________________________404___________________----__________________________

Drthrottlejr
DrthrottlejrLv13Drthrottlejr

I've only read 6 chapters so far, but i can already tell its going to be a good story. Author, please don't drop this. You might not get a lot of people in the first few days to couple weeks, but with a story that's really good so far, they will flock to it soon enough. Also, don't forget to Incorporate the classic george rr martin story telling style. Dont want the mc to have it too easy.

Doragon
DoragonLv5Doragon

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