just read the 180 chapters and I can say that the story is really interesting and specially the world background. there are some problems but overall it's a great novel to read.
love the writing only thing is wish there were more chapters to read caught up in like 3 days my favourite kingdom building so far thank you author!
So far so good, I’m enjoying the story. The MC is not OP, but he is a competent person. Im looking forward to reading what happens next.....
A great novel very well written, the realism and actions taken by the characters are very well configured within the theme, the characters have a great development with the progression of the episodes, in addition to great lines of development for the future.
It is a really good book with an interesting story line. There is solid character development throughout the book. The main issue is the cover. I would suggest a map of Fiveria or Ezaes as the cover to help get a better idea of the world, but otherwise it is great (by the way, my favourite character is Rhydian).
Well written and explores the characters and world in a fluid and organic manner that ties in beautifully with the events of the book acheiving great harmony. Great characters, with fantastic backgrounds and interesting plot points. Hope the author continues the great work.
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Great story and even better kingdom/world building. I love how detailed the story gets when it comes to building and the pace is perfect. the mc isn’t OP so it much more realistic. Unfortunatey that also means there’s nothing unique about the MC - no intro of advanced tech, no cleverness - and as a result makes the story monotonous after a while.
La verdad me encanta la novela, me parece que el mc avanza de forma realista, solo me molesta un poco la regularidad con que publica los capitulos
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