HeavenlyCatKing
Really guys? You're being the worse trash right now. You guys shouldn't be even fucking promoting your barely English stories for this nonsense. Read the fucking story instead of writing trash reviews and advertising your trash novel. Kindly take your shit back to the dumpster where it belongs. Such author doesn't deserve your shitty 1☆ - 2☆ reviews. Guess you guys are really shit at writing ain't it. Go back to the fucking dumpster. Seryoso ba 'to, guys? Napakabasura niyo sa ginagawa ninyo! Alam niyo, dapat nga di man kayo magpromote ng story niyo na hindi man lang maayos pagka-English para sa kawalang ka-kuwentahang to! Bat' di niyo na lang basahin yung story kaysa sa magsulat ng mga mabahong reviews at magadvertise ng mababaho niyong novel. Take your shit at ibalik niyo sa tambakan ng basura kung saan sila nararapat. Hindi deserve ng author mga shitty 1☆ - 2☆ reviews ninyo. Halata namang wala kayong talent sa pagsusulat. Bumalik na lang kayo sa putangina niyong tambakan ng basura kung saan kayo nanggaling!
hindi naman ganun kaganda pero hindi rin siya panget so I don't see why alot of people kept complaining. Ang daming nagsasabing "too detailed" siya well duh, ganun naman talaga ang purpose ng novel. "Mabagal ang takbo ng storyline" calm yo tits guys, hanggang chap 6 palang ata ang nasusulat ni kuya saka hindi dapat minamadali ang storyline... and the writing quality might not be that good but it's still understable (wag kayong mag-inarte). Oh and please stop advertising your stories dito.. konting respeto lang sa author :) Y'all are just a bunch of ignorant assholes and probably jealous of the fact na nasa top 10 yung kanya kaysa sa mga gawa niyo. Saka there's still room for improvement, huwag kayong oa kala niyo mga perpekto kayong tao gosh.
I'm giving you five stars for improving a LOT. I haven't read any of your chapters before but one. Since I downloaded your book earlier, I find it way better than before. Kudos to you, sir. After all the insults and harsh criticism, you still managed to climb in to the top 10. My vote's for you, Author-nim.
Kudos to you author! I can't believe you made it back on the top 10. I hope your rise further. I read your revamped story and must admit that you improved alot. I know you have a good heart. You humbly accepted those criticisms before thats why you are much better now. I hope everyone in this competition is as kind hearted as you.
I wouldn't say much about the things you might have overlooked cause I'm sure you already know it by now. I just want to say that i admire your attitude towards criticisms and that will definitely lead you to places further than where you are now. Keep on writing! You'll learn more and more on the process. I know you're a good writer. You're still young and you surely have the potential to be the best of who you are. Grab all the opportunities to learn. I know one day you'd be one of the best. 😊👍
I must say— even though parang mas matanda ka pa sakin, kasi 12 pa lang ako haha —it's not 'too detailed', like everybody was saying, it's just redundant. You don't need to describe a person they way you have already described them in the previous sentence or paragraph. I've only read chapter 1 and already found it out. I'm not saying it's bad, considering that I'm very kind girl, you just need to know how to construct a detailed yet not redundant story. Also, the use of punctuations must be high. Well, If you would want that, because that actually makes your story look like a real novel. I'm sorry, I can't really support your story. But if you can, please read and vote for mine; a story almost identical to yours– "The Violet Quest". I hope you find this really helpful, despite how the others had let you down. I'm apparently jealous of how you got so many support. But, of course, this competition isn't fair for the stories from the second page up to the last page. People kept focusing on the highest rankings, which makes me really angry at people.