starry8sword
First a disclaimer, people are claiming there is NTR. It is not the protagonist being cucked but another character. The said girl that people were talking about was basically an antagonist to the protagonist. As basically, the whole second arc is about the protagonist ntr another character to make the character killable. Pros: This book is really interesting as it is a parody of several genres. The first arc was a parody of urban cultivation novels and the second was a parody of a harem anime. The author also has made the power system really intriguing. If you like the protagonist face-slapping other characters but you don't like constant young masters troubling the protagonist this book is for you. Cons: The writing is bland and dull but the storytelling is decent. I have seen several grammar mistakes. They are not severe mistakes that make it unreadable though. The title has so far been a lie in that the protagonist is not a young master.
Good i just started yesterday and right now almost finished the free chaps i so here is my review First mc personality: the mc is shameless but not really beta or simp to a female, he smart and know how to joke with other female heroines and the interaction between him and zi yanrou is fun Story development: well i guess the story development is slow but slowly come together since there is no skipping since mc always do thing one at a time but the development can be said good because he doesn’t force heroine to like him using aphrodisiac or anything like that he just flirt with them, help them ,win their heart and the process is detailed and fun For me this novel maybe deserve 4/5 Maybe in the future i might update my review after reading all of it
Love it so far. Creative abilities in a cultivation world setting. Like that loose ends get tied up at a reasonable pacing and nothing gets dragged out for hundreds of chapters. Heroines are sorta beautiful vases tho at this point (~60ch) hopefully as MC strengthens them they become more useful. MC is cunning but isnt a total scum…he’s I guess quite ruthless where necessary but isn’t a sly heartless scum as a typical villain would be. Give it a try its good
scratches the itch of i am the fated villain somewhat, though it revolves more generic route about impressing heroines instead of scheming as much(there is still scheming but its mostly to impress the heroines/to gain their favour) and chosen of heaven dont put too much of a fight even with all of their cheats and of course its in modern era instead of classic cultivation world.
The story is good. It can be a masterpiece if not for grammar mistakes. Romance is build nicely, not like other stories that Heroines love come out of nowhere for MC. The *Scholar* really brings out each characters to life with backgrounds and personalities step by step. The only flaw is the grammar really, need take your time to fix those.
so here is detailed and unbiased review after 240+ chapters..so let me tell you that this is going to be a fun read,, something like a getaway from the world ans relax while reading this novel.. as for ntr the mc ntr'd a rapist so i dont know why people were so angry.. most of them are kids who didn't even read the arc and just saw other reviews and decided to follow along.. it is very funny and it's honestly very fun watching typical cliches of "protagonists" getting ruined and the mc gets more girls, all of them of different with some similarities but saki-chan is my fav.. the mc grows and learn he isn't some know it all from the beginning, he makes mistakes and learns thru trial and error but he's still a chad who doesn't let anyone push him around and manipulates skillfully.. the system isn't omnipotent but still very powerful...mc is still exploring the world and there is room for growth for the author in world development... bottomline if you aren't a snowflake and can think for yourself, independent of the prejudice then you'll enjoy it very much.. remember this is a fantasy-comedy, don't go too into details... i'd rate it a 4.6 rn but if the author improve it can easily get a 4.7-4.8...improve world background make characters more fleshed out, grammer is okay, post character images... thats all
The best thing about this novel is its dialogues. Author knows how to write good romantic scenes and flirty lines. Mc was really weak in beginning. To gain power, he had to help villains and make the son of heavens lose their reputation. So mc used his mind and mouth. Hence, clever dialogues were needed in negotiation scenes, and they were delivered very properly. What I dislike - the harem part. Mc keep on flirting with one girl after another, and tells no girl that he is seeing other girls. But it was necessary also for the story, as mc needs to take away heroines from sons of heaven, to weaken them. So, overall, the story is very good in beginning, and still going good after 180 chapters. looking forward to next parts.
I didn't even reach the ntr part, decided to drop and write this before reading the reviews/spoilers.Having system luck/destiny plundering harem as a combo is an easy recipe for contrived plot and incoherent characters. I think there might be some novels that could make that combo work but this novel isn't one of them.