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Reviews of Villainous Young Master's Otherworldly Harem

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Villainous Young Master's Otherworldly Harem

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Blue_Robin
Blue_RobinLv12Blue_Robin

Alright now let me start with this. I really like this novel. It has flaws, don't get me wrong, but I can look past them. Let me just get the flaws out of the way. The writing quality can be poor at times, though it usually maintains a consistent mediocrity. If I remember correctly the author is not a native english speaker, however tries his best with the aid of Grammarly. This means it's readable, but mistakes will be noticeable. The second flaw is the romance. This is a harem. Neglect play seems to be a fetish of the mc's and boy does he not care if everyone knows it. Jokes aside, the mc does acquire a lot of women, and from what I have read in the synopsis there are even more to be acquired. He obviously doesn't have the time to deal with them all, and will likely consistently ignore a group of them who simply aren't near him. He also isn't super clear about his intentions to love multiple people with anyone but this one heroine who also double's as current best girl. Final flaw is a matter of personal preference, and not something that is necessarily a problem. In fact it hasn't even happened yet. Dimension jumping. For the love of gosh, please dont send him to different universes, he has enough stuff to worry about already. Its fine as is please don't. Anyways, two flaws and personal plea aside, the rest of the story is good. The action is fast and doesn't drag on. The main character is smart while not making inexplicable decisions, the heroines are (mostly) memorable and have their own personalities and thoughts. The system, while sentient, doesn't abuse it's sentience to make the mc do as it wishes. There's also a bit of cringe, but not enough to cause second hand embarrassment. The comedy is also pretty good. It also doesn't hide the seggs from you for 100+ chaps. All in all, besides the romance and writing, everything else is solid. 3/5 Keep it up lad!

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tuba_san
tuba_sanLv3tuba_san

The author's writing has improved a lot from the past. Also the plot changed from the original novel, so even if you were a fan of that you should read this one. This is a present for the author.

Efthee
EftheeLv11Efthee

Sigh, this is definitely a chinese novel, one in which if you turn off your logic, you will enjoy. Ungrateful mc The system isn't really explained properly. Sentinel System, who is kinda tsundere... the personality of mc changes quite a lot.

Thabang_23
Thabang_23Lv4Thabang_23

Reveal spoiler

shyfix291
shyfix291Lv4shyfix291

don't drop author.....keep going[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update]

Vbbcanz
VbbcanzLv12Vbbcanz

I really liked the novel, atleast until the newest chapter where there is ntr, normally I would give this 5 stars but the ntr ruined everything

KacbRe
KacbReLv4KacbRe

NTR, NTR, NTR, NTR, NTR, NTR, NTR, NTR, NTR, NTR, NTR, NTR, NTR, NTR, NTR, NTR, NTR, NTR, NTR, NTR, NTR, NTR, NTR, NTR, NTR, NTR, NTR, NTR MC Cuckold, MC Cuckold, MC Cuckold, MC Cuckold, MC Cuckold, MC Cuckold, MC Cuckold, MC Cuckold, MC Cuckold, MC Cuckold, MC Cuckold, MC Cuckold,

Pedro_Sousa
Pedro_SousaLv14Pedro_Sousa

Great novel, who just gets better with time, with the author becoming more used to writing. Definitely a must read.

Immortal_Daoist25
Immortal_Daoist25Lv13Immortal_Daoist25

I've always had a distaste for the romance genre, mainly because more or less everyone thinks that by being a simp then you're being a romantic which is idiotic. Well, the MC/Author is a simp and he clearly likes being belittled by women with how much the women are taking advantage of and belittling him. the spelling is atrocious, don't bother reading this unless you're used to reading novels with Chinese-level intelligence, otherwise, you'll find yourself losing brain cells the further you read. so yeah, if you hate braindead simp MC and overuse of clichés then don't bother with this.

Melshan
MelshanLv7Melshan

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T_Meet_3200
T_Meet_3200Lv2T_Meet_3200

It's one of the best Villain webnovel which is very interesting to read to the end I have only one request to the author please do not drop this novel.

IMBOREDSOIREAD
IMBOREDSOIREADLv2IMBOREDSOIREAD

it's a very good story you should support it and it's an exciting and wonderful story you will never get bored but unfortunately for me I need to stop reading this story because I can't buy anymore chapters so if anyone wants to read this go on iits an amazing story

oldthrall
oldthrallLv15oldthrall

Love it so far. Creative abilities in a cultivation world setting. Like that loose ends get tied up at a reasonable pacing and nothing gets dragged out for hundreds of chapters. Heroines are sorta beautiful vases tho at this point (~60ch) hopefully as MC strengthens them they become more useful. MC is cunning but isnt a total scum…he’s I guess quite ruthless where necessary but isn’t a sly heartless scum as a typical villain would be. Give it a try its good

Dick_Wizard
Dick_WizardLv4Dick_Wizard

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lulneverlucky
lulneverluckyLv4lulneverlucky

scratches the itch of i am the fated villain somewhat, though it revolves more generic route about impressing heroines instead of scheming as much(there is still scheming but its mostly to impress the heroines/to gain their favour) and chosen of heaven dont put too much of a fight even with all of their cheats and of course its in modern era instead of classic cultivation world.

LAAIYH0412
LAAIYH0412Lv3LAAIYH0412

Hmm,how can I say this.This book is good,has a nice plot eventhough you think it's cliché but author has an amazing ideas tu surprise you.

luckyman
luckymanLv12luckyman

Is gate of immortality dropped I was thinking to read it ,,,,,,l,,,,,,,,,,,..,.,..,..,.,…….l…. ………,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,.,…………………….

Error_Bot
Error_BotLv2Error_Bot

Good i just started yesterday and right now almost finished the free chaps i so here is my review First mc personality: the mc is shameless but not really beta or simp to a female, he smart and know how to joke with other female heroines and the interaction between him and zi yanrou is fun Story development: well i guess the story development is slow but slowly come together since there is no skipping since mc always do thing one at a time but the development can be said good because he doesn’t force heroine to like him using aphrodisiac or anything like that he just flirt with them, help them ,win their heart and the process is detailed and fun For me this novel maybe deserve 4/5 Maybe in the future i might update my review after reading all of it

Againts_The_Gods
Againts_The_GodsLv2Againts_The_Gods

Acabo de comensar está novela apenas voy por el capítulo 39 es muy buena autor sube más capitulos Mmmmmm mmmmmm mmmmmm mmmmmm mmmmmm mmmmmm mmmmmm mmmmmm mmmmmm mmmmmm mmmmmm mmmmmm mmmmmm mmmmmm

Kuroko_Yami
Kuroko_YamiLv3Kuroko_Yami

thank you for making my day coloursful . and many many thank you for (happy ending for our saki) what a good author san. keep going author san and stay healthy OK! .