Dragonspectre
Well in my humble opinion, of course without offending anyone who thinks differently from my point of view, but also by looking at this matter in a different way and without fighting and by trying to make it clear, and by considering each and everyone's opinion, I honestly believe that I completely forgot what I was going to say.
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The 2nd and 3rd chapter was the most disgusting I quit here..................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
Bak şimdi. Ana karakter bir gerizekalı. Bana göre tam bir gerizekalı. Hani öyle böyle bir gerizekalı. O kadar gelişmiş teknolojisi var, 2000 lerde olan dünyayı DÜŞÜNÜYOR. SAÇMA! Git kendine yeni Bi gezegen bul,Torunların olsun, evlen, gezegenleri fethet, savaş, yap işte bişeyler. Ne diye ilkel dünyada kalırsın ki!
It’s was a cool concept and great story, but it just became boring when he decided to do all that religion stuff, I get it was for his own benefit and he had other plans, but I thought we were going for a an adventure type thing in space learning about his connection to the light dimension, maybe light kingdom building with his knee city where he developed it. I have nothing against where you’re taking the story from here, but I found myself skimming the chapters after this happened as it wasn’t interesting to me anymore. Best of luck with the writing, it’s just not for me.
I think the author is super dumb. super op MC = super dumb intelligence. the guy created advanced AI and built a phantom drive but doesn't have some backbone. I don't have actual reasoning behind this kind of author with good boy type MC always wiggling their tail for good deeds. total disappointment don't read it time waste