Yes! I'm your first reviewer! And just like what you've asked, I'll be giving my honest review.
Number 1: Writing Quality
Truly, the author is remarkable when it comes to English. I have not seen any errors or typos. There also no misspelled words. As for the paragraph length, they don't seem lengthy and long. When it comes to details, the author has an impressive way of describing them, hooking the readers from the very start. I will give this category a five stars.
Number 2: Stability of Updates
Well, I'll just assume that you update frequently. Haha!!! Five stars for this category too.
Number 3: Story Development
Hmm, I have yet to grasp since it only contains two chapters but for me, the story seems to be smooth. Details are clear and precise, meaning the author only describes what is important and not only for the sake of increasing word count.
Number 4: World Background
When it comes to this category, the author describes each scene/scenario in a genuine manner. Meaning, the readers can easily portray what the author wants them to portray.
Number 5: Characters
Honestly, I have no complaints too. They're(Characters) described in a vivid manner and they are very intriguing. The dialogues are also genuine and well thought.
This is a five over five novel for me! Keep up the good work author and good luck!!