InsanelyParanoid
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Story is very hard to read at least early for me, it's a combination of questionable grammar and sentence structure, weird pacing and unexplained concepts. It felt really hard to immerse myself when I had to reread several paragraphs a chapter to try and understand what's going on and still end up asking "what's this? What's that? When was that explained?" the premise itself is very interesting and has potential for world building and maybe it gets better later but I couldn't force myself to push through it. In all this is in desperate need of an editor.
Iβve read 20 chapters so far and itβs progressing at a stable rate, also the story has a lot of potential I feel like the character changed a bit too much in this few chapters but over all the story is awesome and has the same amount of potential as your other novels if not more so I definitely added to the library and Iβm hoping for releases
well well...another work of brother Paranoid, what can I say, if you have already read his previous works then in this novel you will get surprised because author improved quite a lot ,for example you can see he is using more new vocabularies ( and it seems he also calmd down his fetishes tooπ ) and grammars are also better but sometimes still you can find some misspelled words or repeated ones... the story is cliche at the start but it will turn into a interesting plot, for a fantasy story it's good... the romance part is also satisfying and is not rushed...but at the beginning you will think MC has some mental problems but don't think too much about it...π and for the harem part, I can't say much now since MC has 1 wife till now and another woman who is in love with him too till chapter 59, but author said it will not be a big harem ... so give this novel a try you will not get disappointed ππ» . . . Update stability: 7/10 Writing quality: 7/10 Characters: 8/10 World background: 9/10 Romance: 7.5/10 Author interaction with readers: 10/10
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