AvlyDarkz
So here's the second FIRST REVIEW...(the first FIRST REVIEW was deleted because of typos and other stuff.) So grandpa likes it... And has high expectations for this work, I just can't stop loving the writing quality and how daughter explains the thoughts that are going on inside the characters. So grandpa gonna keep reading this unless daughter makes my trauma shot up! Good luck. The second FIRST REVIEW, DONE. I hope there are no typos this time, cuz I'm gonna delete and right the Third FIRST REVIEW if that happens.
having read its counter part, I have to say this is a masterpiece in the making. The characters are vibrant and tge story line grabs your heart in the first few chapters. There are a few grammar errors but nothing serious. Having read its predecessor Sins Of Anna, I have high hopes for this authors second book. The only other thing I can think of to say above all this is "update faster author-san". I can't wait to read more!
Okay, the author is an established one so if you are a reader of her other novels already I don't think I need to say anything. You know what to expect. A good story, excellent characters, lots of emotion and passion, but somewhat lackluster grammar which becomes inconsequential because you get too engrossed in the story. That's basically it. If you are a grammar nazi you will get triggered, if you want to read a well thought out novel that includes passion(wink) you will definitely enjoy this.
This story gets you hooked. Well written except for a few errors here and there which can be rectified by using an editor. I strongly believe the number of readers will increase by using an editor( just a suggession). I came here after reading sins of Anna and this story sure didn't disappoint me. I would 100% recommend this novel mainly because of a new and exciting story line. Good job Author. I'm in love with this one too.. Don't miss this story guys. It really is good.
It really is not a bad novel however the sins of Anna got me to have a certain level of expectations. I started this novel on the same energy and hype, I kept waiting for the real punch but none. Perhaps had the sins of Anna not so great I would have thoroughly enjoyed this too. I noticed however that the grammar mistakes have reduced in this one so that is one step forward. Don't be discouraged in anyway, your stories are truly beautiful and thank you. I enjoy your style of writing, portraying the story from the character's perception. Keep up the good work. I look forward to your many great novels.