FLORA_BARUA
It is a very fascinating and interesting story that truly grabs you in with first chapter. It has got a promising plot and very nice world buildup. Plus author has a very good command over the language.I also like Erin very much and the bond that is shared by all the charachters. Also as our dear author is very interactive it makes the read even more intresting. Thank you dear author for sharing such a wonderful story with us.
Awesome work✨✨ Though I don't prefer reading books belonging to the genre romance, I liked this book and do appreciate the hardwork of the author and as I have mentioned earlier that I don't read this genre so I can't suggest anything to the author . At last, the book is promising and will do wonders one day . All the best to the author and my best wishes are always with you. [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
There's a huge jump in the writing quality as it gets better and more cohesive with newer chapters. One thing I'd like to suggest is that instead of flatly stating a character's mood, how about conveying through expressions and demeanors and choice of words in dialogues? That would give a bit more depth to the already rich story. I myself am not a big fan of the genre, but I can still see others salivating over the plot progression. Kudos!
The author's writing style is very unique, I'm not particularly a fan of it, but the story is interesting enough to make me stay put. There were some grammatical mistakes here and there, but we all make mistakes so I'm sure later on it will be improved. I have to say though, that the first chapter seemed a bit cliche, it was honestly a turn down for me, but for others, it might not be. Either way though, this story has potential and is a great read for those who like this genre. I wish you all the best author!
Wow...Your story is really good Author...👏👏👏The truth of MC'S life is unknown to her also is really a good concept and her Boss is scary...Yes I loved the way story is going on dear.👍👍 I am really big fan of vampires so count me in for this book...❤️❤️❤️ Keep updating more...❤️❤️ Keep updating everyday...👍👍