Chantielu
I will start from the beginning ;) The title is really great! (unusual at Webnovel ;)) The cover page - stunning! I would only change the place of the title and the font, because the whole composition is a bit disturbed. The story is nicely written! The plot is interesting, the characters also. Don't worry about minor mistakes. Every serious writer has an editor who deals with the correctness of the text, etc. and we do everything ourselves... ;) You're doing very well!
In terms of the story overall, stupendous ! While the concept of vampires has spanned countless lifetimes, this is one that gives the characters and the worldâ life. Speaking of characters, I found Dianna to be equivalent to freedom, so much so that it is blinding, and I enjoy her minute movements and the hints of comedy in here. There were a few issues about run-on sentences or the occasional verb misspellings, but this did not hamper my reading at all. So I will keep this at 5 stars for writing quality ! All in all, a polished gem that will hit fame sooner or later, so keep up the good work, Author !