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Interesting story, fancy style, wide imagination, very enjoyable stuff. Still on the first chapters but already getting hyped up with the sudden and intriguing opening. Can't wait for the character development. You've got great writing material for an undoubtedly successful novel. Keep the great work and good luck with your next chapters.
I really like detective mystery stories and this one starts off in a very interesting and gripping way. It soon begins to show that things aren't what they initially seemed, which is a big plus for me. I always love to be surprised while reading these sort of books 🤭 The language and style are also very good, and there aren't too many unnecessary details and descriptions. It's simple and flowy. Keep up the good work, author! 🥰
The book was a decent read. The chapters were a bit on the short side meaning there wasn't much story development; writing quality was also better than most books I've read. You should try and keep to one tense when writing as it reads better, other than that great book! Nice job Author, waiting for new chaps!