The story is rather interesting, it's mature but in a different way from the R18 stuff that you find here in webnovel, which is mostly smut. The pacing of the story is also quite to my liking. In the beginning, the chapters were rather short but as you read on the chapters get longer and longer. You can feel the author improving the more he writes. Overall I truly recommend reading this novel.
Just a simple review Writing quality - 5 Stability of updating - 5 Story development - 5 Character design - 5 World background - 5 This story is different from all the novels i've read.Mc is calm,lazy,smart and antagonist,different from your usual dumb mc.For now he has only one goal which is to find out about his own existence. This is a story that you guys won't regret reading.
I enjoyed the story,it is very different from what I usually read ,but it has been an enjoyable read so far,and I will continue reading it .I will no go into details about the plot in this review This was joy to read .I found no glaring mistakes,It was very Pleasant to read through and the flow was good. I THINK THE PLOT WAS INTRESTING.EVERYTHNIG To GET EXPLAINED WELL Note:I would suggest you to try it out
It has a lot of potential to develop into a great strory though i believe it lacks a bit of world development but its still to soon to judge. The only complain i have from the story is the loyalty which Blaze showes as it happens a bit too fast without giving us the reader time to understand his emotions and personality .
I’ve read the first 75 chapters so far and find the story interesting. The writing while not the best keeps you interested in the story and each chapter is better than the last. The transitions between the point of view (POV) don’t flow smoothly especially at the beginning however the tone is consistent. The chapters are at a decent length (aka not too short). I added the story to my library as i am looking forward to how the story progresses and improves. Theres not a lot of world developement in the 1st 75 chapters but there is character development for 2 of the characters. Some of the development of the main character could have been explained more before the multiple time jumps.
What can I say but good stuff about this novel it’s really great and I recommend it. The background settings are great nothing about is bad. The author yes bro Hermes the great author u did a fantastic job here. It gives of a different vibe than the usual stuff that people read is exciting which will make readers want to continue it. If I had more time I would have read this much earlier but I had to write and increase my stock and you know how I am with stocks so forgive me for taking this much time to write this review. You deserve more than 5 stars if there was more I would have given u more too bad there isn’t.