Henrietta_Otu
This is a beautiful story of two very responsible and wise people. It is very nicely portrayed and gracefully taken forward. It is very nice to see how it progresses and how they are finding their ways forward overcoming the challenges they are in. Thank you dear author for sharing such a beautiful story with us.
it's a great story â€đ€«keep it up and looking forward to reading more. the writing quality is great! everything flowed really well. the story development is slow and catches the readers attention, more detail would make it more amazing but I love it. updating stability, is moderate, when I'm writing this review it says u haven't updated in a while so please update soon!! I would love to read more the world background is great, I felt the characters emotions and related to the events. pure talent â€đ
I enjoy where the story is heading, the incoming romance, the characters are alright. Maybe you could work on writing descriptions more rather than having it all dialogue so that the readers could connect with the characters better, understanding their emotions and thoughts. Despite all that, I enjoyed reading the first few chapters of this story. It has potential, so keep up the good work! Keep updating~
I really enjoy where the story is going and the premises. It seems to be a kind of Romeo and Juliet in the modern era kind of vibe to me. Though I am not too sure as of now. The grammar needs to be touched up but other than that, the story has me hooked. Good job author! Thank you for giving us this wonderful work of yours. I enjoyed it immensely.[img=recommend][img=recommend]