EricaPugh
I enjoy this story a lot, I get an Assassination Classroom vibe a bit, but you can tell its completely different. Like I hope maybe one day you decide to make a manga this so good, and I am sure it would be popular amongst the anime world if you made a manga out of it. Keep up the amazing work Author~ can't wait to read more chapters!
I love how the author draws us into the emotions of the character. I felt so bad for AJ in the beginning, the story is well written, some minor mistakes but nothing that could be noticed too much. AJ is so mysterious, and even though he is a genius he still has flaws and shows a more human side. Unlike some characters that are just too perfect AJ feels really real in the story. I fully recommend this book! Keep up the great work Author~san.
The story is amazing and the narration is like the cherry on top-sweet, simple and in a non-hurried manner, which makes it a smooth read. The reader can instantly connect with the characters and their feelings, thanks to your narration. There are some mistakes- grammatical and omission of words. Also, often you use a particular word twice, sometimes in different context and other time in the same. These interrupts the flow and gives a kind of escape route to stop reading further. Apart from that, the plot, the character's development, the narration everything is awesome.
Did u look at the cover? Wow. just wow. The author did an awesome job at creating the mysterious character i.e., AJ. The author found that sweet spot of perfectly balanced Emotions that must be conveyed. Great description with such vivid details that reader cant help themselves but dragged into the life of AJ. I wished the author posted more free chapters before locking them, i felt it was too soon probably coz i want to read some more. I would highly recommend this one