Reviews of Unknowingly Cultivate a Experimental Cultivation technique

The stroy has potential. I like how you created it that he was turning into a girl due to the cultivation technique, but you should have drawn out the transformation through many chapters. While also making it where the main character doesn't realize what was goig on until much later in the story's development. Like maybe have it where the breasts don't become that substantial until later in cultivation.

this is my first novel and definitely not a novelist. I'm only creating this for my fun and sorry for my grammar because I am only a reader not a writer. English or any thing that require me to write something is not my strength.

well, first of all , the grammar is really bad . sentences are connected horrendously. explanations are half aszed. charachters are stupid with no personality given.