Josev_Quadra
This is good. I love it. The author did a good job describing everything that happens with the characters and their surroundings. I will not say anything about grammar or anything like that because I myself is not that good with English but from my reading, I don't find any problem with that. Good Luck [img=recommend]
Sci-fi is one of my favorite genressss! I'm glad to have found this! I love your writing style, it is very descriptive which makes me imagine not only what the characters does, but also what the surroundings look like as they does it. Wishmaker is very interesting, it is a great device that surely even real people would like to have. Surely there will be disadvantages to it and will look forward to the chaos it will bring 👀 Great work author!
This is the first time I have read a sci-fi novel. I am more familiar with movies and anime in sci-fi genre but reading it is a first so this is quite fresh. The concept is good, the blurb was interesting. There are few errors when it comes to grammar but still tolerable. A few subtle hints about the futuristic setting may spice up the novel more.