Hello there, folks! I am very happy to see that Ungranted finally gain some recognition! As you can see, the novel is written in POV (point of view) manner. I hope that this will make the readers feel more immersive in the world and able to follow the characters development more intimately! I hope you enjoy my work! There's also another book of mine called, The Voice in the Dark if you like contemporary romance. Please, do drop by if you want to read more of my works^^
To be honest, this book has potential. A lot of grammatical, punctuations, and tenses mistakes. But don't worry, these mistakes are common for beginners. Also, you need to research more about the thing you are gonna put in the book. This way, you can better describe it and the scenes in the story. Improve your vocab and knowledge. Well, that's all. Do your best!