I really like this novel, it is interesting and has a unique system twist. Character development so far is good. And the way you progressed the story shows you have talent. Needs a little bit of polishing. Few of the scenes feel rushed . Though I understand you want to make it humourous, but the synopsis shows that this book has a suspense-thriller theme. And I still think the prologue chapter needs some more refining, especially the beginning narrative. Anyway keep writing ! I 'll definitely support and keep your book.
Superb writing quality. It's still early days but the author is doing a good job with this novel. The dialogues are also very good and easy to understand. Though some parts feel a bit rushed but still, it's just a few. Normally not a genre I typically enjoy but the author got me hooked and curious from the first chapter. Keep it up
I'll give my honest opinion, this novel for the few chapters I've read looks good, I say it seems because it's too early to judge, the writer seems to think a lot about world construction and characters, I hope it continues with the good story, just I have a review, you should use a better synopsis to attract more audience, make people curious with a good synopsis.
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