Reviews of Undone - An Undead LitRPG Series
Undone - An Undead LitRPG Series
JacobCavalida
- Overall Rate
- Writing Quality
- Updating Stability
- Story Development
- Character Design
- world background
This is shockingly well written It’s only 8 chapters in so saying much about characters and world is a bit eh Story development is interesting However I do wish the character would ask some more questions, and check what is undead system can do Character and world is fine, a bit barebones but again 8 chapters
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By the time I writing this, this story has 13 chapters so far. The writing quality is outstanding and I would even say on par with regular books you would find in stores. As for the story, of course with only 13 chapters there is not a whole lot to discuss about, but still one can see a certain direction the author is going. Character development and World building is all there and its only just getting started. I’m very satisfied with what the author is doing so far and trust him to keep up this very well-paced story. He keeps updating on a daily basis, so also nothing to “complain” here. So in the end I would definitely recommend this story for everyone and encourage to at least try the first Chapters.
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