Kriuswer
Word of warning: the premise of the story is amazing and the plot itself is not half bad, but everything is ruined by the worst grammar you'll ever see. It actually induces physical pain from reading more than a couple chapters at once, so be prepared for literal headache if you decide to dive in. P.S.: I really hope author finds himself an editor, it would be a waste of a good fanfic if nothing gets fixed
Well this mine of rating do look in the middle. But you do understand that your writing quality is still terrible. Bear with it and hope you gotten better later on author :) Much I like the DC comics. I don't like how the heroes perceived to even resolute what true justice is. Though I do know for sure that sometimes there be deaths towards the villains. But that's rare as ever be. Even this superhero universe is dark and edgy compared to Marvel. The heroes with the biggest hypocrite Batman only just create a repeated cycle. Where bad guy get caught, imprisoned but escaped later on to continue more evil deeds then once again caught. THE CYCLE REPEATS. This reality even fictional need someone like a ghost rider that delivered TRUE JUSTICE.
The author has a very unique approach to building his character. Stroy is interesting and the universe gives it alot of space to grow. But the author can not use his pronouns right and makes the story confusing to read. Story has alot of potential and is worth the effort to read even if the misuse of pronouns makes it very confusing fron time to time.
If he's half angel he shouldn't be able to feel lust or sexual desire only the will to protect and heal and if he's also half demon he shouldn't feel lust or pride or anything since he's not the embodiment of sin but the prosecuter to condemn the wicked since he's created by god he shouldn't have impure taught 's.i noticed author changed the mc's mindset to someone debaucherus and to someone like at start he's all out justice the real way along with being Faithfull but now he's falling and he won climb back up since an angel fall it's a fallen angel the if it continues its a demon of the 7 deadly sins witch is satanic like lusifer who ****ers up humanity and is the starter for all sins.
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