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Reviews of Ultimate Marvel System

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Ultimate Marvel System

Imbreak

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Zetsway
ZetswayLv12Zetsway

First of all, I think this deserves a warning. The MC makes stupid choices. If endless frustration at missed opportunities is not your cup of tea, this may be a miss for you.(I have that enough in my real life, no need to relive it in fanfiction). Second, It's been 5 chapters and I still can't place where and when the MC transmigrated. It's not the start of MCU, as the Avengers are already a thing, but Captain Marvel is also with them and Tony is still alive...I kind of lost interest when I found myself floating between Marvel timelines and plots so...yeah...pass.

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HypnosGodofSleep
HypnosGodofSleepLv14HypnosGodofSleep

Bruh, this should be a tutorial on how not to write fan fiction. This book has plot holes larger than the one in your heart when your dad left you.

Omkar_More_3591
Omkar_More_3591Lv3Omkar_More_3591

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CruelReality
CruelRealityLv4CruelReality

I skimmed the first few chapters or so hoping the MC would choose villain for once, or at least be a morally grey hero. Well, the author exceeding in disappointing me even more than he would’ve making a cliche ”hero” MC. The MC requests to be a policeman forfeiting the rewards of either the hero or villain path in his stupidity. Assuming we don’t get a new MC a few chapters in I know I will feel absolutely sick watching such an idealistic and naive moron somehow get carried through the dangerous world of marvel by his system.

masterreader02
masterreader02Lv13masterreader02

the reader should know this before reading the story, the mc is one of those mc that have everything handed to him, the woman, or atleast the first i read are the typical that they would fall for the mc because he is breathing in an certain way, for example the balck widow in this fanfic is literally an out of character balck widow, she doesnt act a like a super spy or even assasin, heck she act like high school confused teenager and sleep with the mc just because. knowthing more nothing less also the choices the mc makes are childish and stupid at the very least, he is a fortysomenting year old guy that wakes up in the body of 25 years old guy and act like kid in his 12

SkyNeves
SkyNevesLv10SkyNeves

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mao_zi
mao_ziLv4mao_zi

imagine being given a second chance at life then you waste it as a cop in world which is already more corrupt then ours . yeah i don't have enough brain cells to waste on this

MiRai
MiRaiLv5MiRai

Hmm, thanks to LewdPaper, Grid, and others who keep pestering Break to write another fanfic in discord server... We finally success to make Imbreak to upload another fanfic after 2 years has passed...

hazy_wolf
hazy_wolfLv4hazy_wolf

The excuse I made the MC stupid because I wanted him to be stupid is only thing the author could say for creating this. The MC literally said I don't if this body is a virgin so I have to act like a virgin but he's not a virgin. If this first deter you from this story you are a more open-minded person than me and I salute you.

Giga_Weeb
Giga_WeebLv2Giga_Weeb

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THE_BLACK_ONE
THE_BLACK_ONELv4THE_BLACK_ONE

I can't. I just can't. you know I had high hopes for the story. in fact, I was one of the first few people who read it but it's not good. I just have to say I'm sorry

Alexei_4521
Alexei_4521Lv11Alexei_4521

You know I looked at the rating and I thought it was a good fanfic but the truth is that this fanfic has one of the worst mc I've ever read.........................

Phantom_X143
Phantom_X143Lv3Phantom_X143

Can't even read past the first 3 chapters.

Lizrock
LizrockLv4Lizrock

Ya no aguanto más cada se vuelve más estúpido y sabelotodo😡 [img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

LukeMorningStar
LukeMorningStarLv3LukeMorningStar

I loved!! Continue with the great job !!! <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3<3 <3 <3 <3<3 <3 <3 <3<3 <3 <3 <3<3 <3 <3 <3<3 <3 <3 <3<3 <3 <3 <3<3 <3 <3 <3<3 <3 <3 <3

Sin_of_GREED
Sin_of_GREEDLv13Sin_of_GREED

writing quality is only thing good in this. this is basically an Chinese Marvel fanfic but an unsensored vr. , which sadly is not enough overcome all negatives of this novel to make me continue reading this sigh another waste of time i hope writer takes this as constructive feedback and work in future to not make his novel similar to Chinese works afterall if i wanted to read such work there are hundreds of Chinese Marvel fanfics with chapters count ranging from 200 to 2500 ch

LifelessMan
LifelessManLv5LifelessMan

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jon_hathaway
jon_hathawayLv10jon_hathaway

so far storys great only complaint is the new chapter update takes a while but still really good story and unique as far as i know being a cop in marvel in a first for me. Well done keep up the good story

Fox_king_1789
Fox_king_1789Lv4Fox_king_1789

First of all many many thanks for Author who started this work after the Fans insisted and regarding the work so i have few words only what do you expect from Author who has written a Masterpiece like "Batman's little brother"

holy_anonymous2
holy_anonymous2Lv4holy_anonymous2

all your works is trash . dont write fanfic again , this too stupid .