JiyuYami
Your novel deserves the 5 stars 4-star writing quality grammar errors are quite common but you said it's because you use a translator is a proofreader so it's forgivable for Stability of updates Story development Character design I can't say anything yet because we are in chapter 5 (of the story) the best point is are your vote hold Global Context because you took the risk of putting the Global Context before the MC found out but rather put a Global Context before starting the MC adventure