Reviews of Ultimate Cypher (Marvel)
Ultimate Cypher (Marvel)
Anubis_Creationz
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Shameless author here. I hope you guys have fun reading this. I decided to share this with you guys because of how much I love Marvel fics. There's not a lot of good Marvel SI stories out there. This is my contribution to the community. I hope this inspires to write your own fic. I am also sorry for any mistakes I make in the future. I am very open to suggestions and new ideas and have already taken tons of inspiration from you guys. If you have a suggestion or a cool idea don't be afraid to share. Who knows you may find your idea in the fic while reading. Pointing out mistakes or suggestions are welcome. Usless complaining is not. And if you feel the urge to complain. Take a breath and remove the book from you library and read something else. Anyways hope all of you have fun. ππ
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Hello fellow reader and Author, this my review while i am at chapter 12 of this novel/fanfic The good things : - Its writing quality is better than many novels on this site 3/5 - A new, atleast for me, Marvel character, (never heard of Cipher) - Updates are okay to - Nice long chapter The bad things : - every paragraph starts with " I " - dialogue are mostly written in a cluster within paragraphs - too much info dumping (could be used for future interaction or dialogue between the mc and someone else) - The Mc himself, he jumps if a door opens, stutters when he talks to a girl and doesnt even wear some kind of mask to hide who he is. ( see kingpin part ) He also talks out loud with his "smartwatch/AI, in a Library or on street, what screams to be overheard by someone or something (Shield ...) To sum up, Interesting novel with great potential and okayish writing quality but which might need an editor to truly shine. Also some chapter would be nice to see our Mc interacting with the world and the people living within. I will read the rest of the novel too and might update in the comment section of this review. So far a 3.5/5 stars Where 5 stars is a book which i will read several times and 1 star is trash with too many clishes and bad writing quality or a MC acting like a anime character around woman. If you read till here, you have read 1579 words written by me and i thank you for taken this time for my review. Bless you all with a cup full of warm tea and have a nice day or night beautyfull people, apache helicopter or whatever you might be.
Really enjoying the story, it's a good read, not too heavy but there's emotion. There's a good ratio of dialog and description so it doesnt read like a power point presentation. There's a great main character, his decisions make sense for him, the world is described really well but not to a ridiculously detailed level. The author guides your imagination, they don't push and shove it. 13 chapters in and I hope it keeps going like it is, keep up the good work.
Hey everyone, it's me author san. To be honest with you guys, the fic has a bit of a rough start, but you will see it improve as the story moves forward. The grammar is okay not the best , but it's definitely readable, it won't take away from the experience. I am improving with each new chapter though, so you should see a visible improvement as you get more into the story. There wasn't much character interaction until later in the novel when he finally meets some of the main characters ,but that issue is fixed in later chapters. The chapters are usually between 1500-2000 words. The story progression is moving along nicely haven't heard any complaints about it yet. Overall it's a nice read, there are some mistakes here and there, but nothing that will ruin the experience. I hope you enjoy the story, and let me know what you guys think in the comments. βοΈ
