Reviews of Uchiha in DanMachi

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so far it's pretty good solid grammar, the biggest problem would be excessive caps in scenes with yelling, or talking with the system. So far the system doesn't exactly have a personality, and hasn't forced him to do anything, but other then that the only bad about this is that like one or two scenes are a tad forced/cliche, but overall pretty nice.

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