Reviews of Dragon ancestor

There is no kind way to say this, the story is terrible. The spelling, grammar and punctuation are all disgusting; the MC is a ungrateful brat who calls the Cliche god stingy because he is only given one wish (he totally could have been given nothing). There is no character development as the MC is essentially handed power on a silver platter, he can perform jutsu on first try at a higher level than adults can reach. The writing quality of this story does not progress at all, read at your own risk. To the author, I’m not saying you should give up, but at least get a person more proficient in English to proof read your work and fix any grammatical errors. That should solve a large portion of your problems.

An author question, what line is it on? = 1) before nasca naruto, 2) after the death of minato. (if it is harem) If it is the (first option): I hope you match the protagonist with Kushina and Mikoto. If it is the (second option): the same but that you match it with Hinata and Konan. pdta: Just one comment, because I always see in almost all naruto stories, they always match hinata with naruto, because they are afraid of spoiling the canon.

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Please not a harem

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not much to say i dont want to discourage the author but this is unreadable bot as a plot and chachter its trash but this is his first book (i guess) and i hope he gets better

I like this novel keep up the great work.................................................................................................................................................................................

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I’ve read up to chapter 12 and all I have to say is that this is ****ty as hell like You may think I’m being mean or rude calling someone’s work ****ty but I honestly don’t know what else to call it this is garbage. The main character  was a waste to society before he was reincarnated now that he has been he’s even more of a waste I mean he is a useless stupid idiotic hypocritical piece of garbage. Now do you Arthur you don’t know how to properly word sentences your grammar sucks I mean I’ve seen worse but it’s still bad and your character creation is garbage and the worst part is I actually like this story’s concept but you and all your crap ruined it.

It's not good. The chapters are only about 500 words long. The MC gets one wish and spends it on the purest dragon blood line.. what does that even mean? It's just generic. It kind of reminds me of when authors talk about how they want their characters that have an ancient primordial bloodline. It's stupid and it's just a plot device.

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It’s good but it could be better and also the release rate is slow and I find it interesting as it’s kinda a new path fan fiction authors here at Webnovel haven’t tried yet overall its a pretty solid story its just that the release rate is kinda really slow that’s why for me it’s doesn’t make the cut for a average quality story yet

Thanks for the chapters keep writing, great work on every chapter, thanks for your hard working and hope you can publish more chapters in future...

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its getting a 5 stars just for the tag no harem the amount of garbage harem i see is disgusting i havent even read this yet but idc .....................

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Le entregas poder en bandeja de plata y no hay nada de desarrollo de personaje y nada de historia que aburrido..como me faltan caracteres ,....,,......,....,...................................................................

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