ScytheBergon
Writing Quality: A lot of words uppercased that shouldn't be and words that I'm not sure if they are mispelled or a word from the novel. Stability: Can't say much with 1 chapter Story: Seems confusing, no exposition at the start so it's really confusing what's happening. From what I could understand, it seems ok, would be better if I could understand it all. Character Design: Not much I can really say with 1 chapter World Background: Only 1 chapter, not too sure, something about a church though and variety.