TheRabbitHole
Based on what's written so far, it's clear that a lot of effort went into creating this story. There is a substantial emphasis on world building and the characters are well made. The flow of events is somewhat logical, decently written, and grows more interesting with each chapter. Overall, the story has great potential and is worth reading.
A promising start for what's (hopefully) to come. A short rollercoaster that doesn't have any slow points yet has plenty of downhill sections to keep you engaged. Characters are well defined even if a lot of them fall into tropes and they have a nice dynamic. The world is pretty interesting but it remains to be seen how it'll be explored and expanded upon. Overall, it's a fun ride and a promising start that could lead into a more fleshed out series and if that happens then I'll be there for it
The story, though short, is very immersive and the transition of the scenes and dialogue is smooth. The world-building is also clear and descriptive, while not affecting the flow of the story. It is a very interesting and satisfying read. The characters are also great. They are fleshed out nicely and drives the reader to know and understand them more. I highly recommend it! I only lament the fact that it's short.
It's clear that the author has put a lot of thought into writing the story. Even though it's a one-shot, the world building is on par with some more well known light novels. The characters are well made, and the events seem to hint that something twisted will happen. Overall, I am interested to see what happens next.