Reviews of Twilight - Hell Scorpion
Twilight - Hell Scorpion
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Ok so I like this story because it's different it's not reincarnation and He becomes something else entirely and then a vampire But in the tags, it says Rosalie So I guessing that's his mate but Can you not make it to where he's Not too submissive I've seen One fanfic where he's alright in the beginning with like a lot of girls he messed with but when he got with Rosalie he became submissive real quick tho idc what you do this is your story and I'm enjoying it so far and I hope you can continue im not saying to get him to sleep with random girls im saying thats what the other fanfic did But overall love the story [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
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