True King of the Pirates

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Dropped I just CAN'T EVEN with this s### just no I gave it a chance but only the writing quality is up there IMO though everything probs improves BUT I CAN'T EVEN ENJOY THIS PIECE OF S### BECAUSE THE AUTHOR INSINUATES BOA, SHAYA AND THE TWINS WERE R###ED NO JUST NO F#### YOU. And once more I'm at peace after going through a S### show of a light novel having to add R### just to drive the story.

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Well, first off, this is a fanfiction set in another author's universe. Not to detract from your writing, but the world background isn't exactly your own work. The story itself is still a good concept! I loved the main characters, they were cute and adorable! Unfortunately, the story suffers itself from a few issues that made it unenjoyable for me. I've read One Piece, and understand the references. It's just: The power scaling is out of whack for me. Admirals seem too weak, and our MC starts out seeming too weak (his ki method is supposed to be the most powerful thing in existence, yet it's peak of strength is only just above the Yonkou level?), and then jumps to be able to defeat full blown Admirals when he is still extremely young? It's just... Idk. The idea is good, I just don't think the concept was pulled off quite right.

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I have read up to Chapter 44 which is the lastest Chapter at this point in time. Looking past the Cliffhanger, the story has good potential although some reminders are overly stated in the novel. The cliches have nice twist to them and I love how the author adds his own twist to the story. Great novel for those like OP cultivation novels that feature a little facesmacking and is part of the Cliffhanger Sect. A few Drawbacks are the first 2 chapters have too much information which could have been written better. E.g slowly revealing who the different characters are instead of just shoving them straight away in Chapter 1. Thanks for your work!

Can't read this it so the plot and the Mc contradict All of the works Oda-sensei. Yeah, it's just fanfic at less do it Justice. Drop. don't read this cancer not recommended.

I been looking forward to the update of this novel everyday but to no avail. I just hope the auther will have the enlightenment to continue the writing of the novel. Now, im down with one of my top fav novels. Please author start again updating exciting chapters, im depressed that i could not see the growth of the heavenly demon pirates and how they are going to save roman from the claws of the beast pirates.

I do know, there are many that like this one, and i happen dislike it,. What can you do? I have my own way to judge this story. In my opinion Betrayal is Betrayal no matter what kind of reason is. Because weak? sacrifices? and other noble reason? All in all in other perspective it was Betrayal for leaving your group to your enemy and in humiliating way at that. This pirate group has already black stain in their Nakama history, make them untrustworthy and weak bond or so the other say. What sworn brother? What Pride of Heavenly Demon? It has became joke in just single chapter. Heavenly Demon are Demon that supposed to be crawl to the Heaven and bow to no one and now? Bow to mere beast , laughable.

Why, Whyyyyy, what is the need to share his stuff-OP?? You monster like others write good books but u make a Mr.Cheeks cries blood. The damn 140, you too make me cry...

Story had potential but got lost along the way. Plus adding cultivation too the story with other writing devices that were not need led too more confusion. Mc character development is little to nonexistent all character had potential but not established well which led to readers questioning the reason they make certain irrational decisions. Not to the overwhelming power growth of the character which is way to fast. A story that had its potential wasted due to bad character development and introducing nonessential thing into the story

Definitely worth to read! The plot is being nicely arrange and the build up is so...i can’t put the words to it. Its not your typical trans character novel where u be too op. Keep up the good work and I absolutely can’t wait to read more!

Just perfect you made me addicted to your story, there was also the fact that you took the one piece world and created your own characters and plot which is effective in giving your own flavor so I think you did a great job and keep up the good work.

hey! I was wondering whether you dropped writing this novel?? please give an update as to you are writing or not anymore. I liked this story, and hope you can keep writing it. All the superpowers and descriptions are pretty good. hopefully you can continue, but please tell whether you are continuing or not. Waiting without knowing is pain

I'm disappointed, utterly disappointed. Create Pirate group then at some points Breaking it leave one by one, Bull****. Important for future progress? Bull****. Just says it was because your whims. Power up because some stupid seat back? BS BS BS

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Is the author okay? Last I heard he was sick? Hope you are doing okay mate! Hope you get well soon (need more chapters my addiction is getting worse ) hope too see you soon :)

I like the way the mc views the world. And i also love that he doesn't give a **** about changing the world . This is by far the best story I've read

Not bad, just started reading it. I already like it. Man it would be cool if the protagonist could have White Bear devil fruit as his second devil fruits. Think about it a mixing of Air and White Bear devil fruit truly terrifying. Plus he got some devil fruits power of his mom and father pass through his gene. What kind of terrifying Being would he become? I can't wait.