130 (Non Story)

So the winner of the raffle is DarkMaster0386:

Name: Saint Caroline

Age: 18

Weapon: Rapier

Devil fruit: none

God's gift: Pure Yin Qi Manual

Weapon comprehension: Swordsman or whatever rapier is

Personality: Elegant like a noble but not super arrogant

There were 3 that really caught my eye, but this was the one I thought fit into the future of the story best. You'll see why in the not so distant future.

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On a side note. I know a lot of you are upset about the Roman disappearance and I'm not going to say much other than:

1. It won't be forever.

2. It's important for both Roman's and Ori's future.

3. DO NOT try to threaten me with your views/stones to get me to change the story! As much as I appreciate all my viewers and the stones you give, please remember this story is for free and I'm not going to beg for your views.

This is a practice book where I get to experiment with different ideas and concepts, this is just one of them. If after the return of Roman you still don't agree with that idea then please explain why without throwing your toys out the pram for a story you're not writing!

Not all of your comments went unnoticed. LonelyGodKing, your idea about having me having you as the readers find out about Roman's disappearance alongside Ori was actually a good one and I am upset I didn't think of that when I was writing it. For others if you have any feedback that's constructive (positive or negative) please say so in an adult like manner.

To sum up I will not be going back and "Fixing it", nor will I change my plan so Ori goes and gets Roman back in the next 3 chapters. If you wish to stop reading as a result it's a shame, but I understand.