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The planet that the story takes place on is called valinor. it is many times bigger than earth with many areas that are uninhabitable by humans do to many fierce monsters. the people of valinor are United under the same government but there are big tribes, clans and families. the story takes place in a near future type of setting. monsters are used as materials and pets. people get techniques from power orbs that are dropped by them after death. power orbs can be duplicated by cultivators but there are limitations which change depending on the level of person that is coping the power orb in relation to the monsters, it also takes into consideration of someone's comprehension. copies are graded from F to A with S grade being given if the technique from the power orb has been improved upon. monsters are life forms that failed to form a full consciousness. when monsters form a full consciousness they are called beasts. beasts gain the ability to transform into a humanoid figure and free will.

MC back ground

name: owen write

parents: mark write and jasmine write

siblings: leon write aka leo and Christian write

star rating of mc: corrupted 4 star potential that settles at 2 star.

parents SR:4 star and 2 star respectively.

siblings SR: 3 star for both of them.

owen write starts his story in an nuclear apocalyptic world full of radiation. he reaches a very high level into his evolution with a small amount of creatures or humans that can put him in danger for his life. he gets blind sided by his so called friends fatally wounding him in an attempt to kill him after winning a tough fight against the vampire crown prince.

what they didn't know was that he unlocked the evaluationary technique called blood decay, it normally has the ability to break the DNA helix apart from each other but by using all his energy in every cell in his body breaking away his own cells apart as well he was able to take revenge and dismantle both of his attackers. Owen writes soul was able to transport into a different universeinto the body of a baby. as he was just a baby he wasn't totally aware and he recollected bits and pieces as he grew up. as he is aware of he has 2 doting older brothers one in the military and the other an adventurer who likes to travel a lot and he also has a loving mother that worries too much about him and a goofy father with a lot of energy and time on his hand.

cultivation explanation

from student to grandmaster level you cultivate natural energy from the outside into the body refining and improving the body. the energy stores can be projected outside the body from master level and the energy projected from a grandmaster level can destroy buildings.

supernatural level people are able to control energy around them naturally, they are always getting replenished from the energy outside as they use the energy they stored without the need to meditate. they are able to fly indefinitely. there attacks are added by outside energy so the damage or amount of defence and the like, is increased substantially than just using the inner power. supernatural level people can destroy as small as areas of around a neighbourhood to as large as a small city.

planet level to void level individuals have enough attractive force over energy and matter around them that they form a domain. as the domain goes to higher levels they start having slight control over space and time but that all depends on the are and the person who they are fighting as that other individual might not be affected as much by the manipulating the fabric of space and time.

cosmic level being are able to break into the fabric of space and time to harness cosmic energy. cosmic energy can not only change the very nature of the type of matter or energy in the universe but it can also refines comic practitioners into near immortal beings with there death only do to malpractice.

deity level entities are gods that have been there since the beginning of time each with there own understanding behind a law of the universe.

natural law entities: are the extension of the universes consciousness. it is the judge, jury and executioner when it comes over governing over all the things that are happening inside the universe. removing existences that are destroying the balance of the universe and awarding those who enrich and add to the universe.

guys my grammar is really bad, i am publishing this just to get some feedback on my ideas and if you have any suggestions. when I finally have a story that can be developed correctly, I will work on my grammar and style of writing to the best of my ability and understanding from YouTube tutorials on writing novels. lmao

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