Reviews of Traveling Through Worlds With A System

This is the Author here. I'd like to tell everybody that this is my first story written. I will admit it, I am not a good writer but I wanted to give it a try because I love reading novels like this. I thank everybody who supports my book and respect everybody who don't. I will be reading through the chapters as I go and edit sentences that I want to make sound better and words I made a mistake writing. This story is just for fun, I may or may not continue and finish it. Also I'd like to collaborate with readers so give me some name ideas for people I introduce in the story that aren't already owned by their creators. I have not made an outline, I am going with the flow and writing whatever comes to mind. I will probably make mistakes with some details in the story so feel free to correct me. My plans for publishing new chapters aren't made yet so they will probably come out randomally. Once again thanks for the support and ask questions if you need me to elaborate on something.