17 Please Read

So I didn't expect my book to blow up so fast and there have been several complaints about the quality of the book going down. A lot of you guys seem to have strong opinions of where the book needs improvement so please tell me what you would like to see changed, if you have suggestions please comment. And for those who are enjoying my book, I thank you and I will keep uploading chapters on the regular. I want to make this book enjoyable for everyone so please tell me what you think needs to be changed.