SauceMaster64
Writing quality: I'd say it's pretty good, though it may be a bit unrefined and messy. The grammar is fine, with some occasional mistakes that get corrected almost immediately once pointed out. Stability of updating: More often than not, the author updates 2 chapters a day. Sometimes, there's only one chapter, and rarely, there's no chapter at all. When that happens, the author tries to compensate in the future. Emphasis on "tries". Story development: The story is kind of rushed but it's developing quite nicely. Uses clichés but I'd like to think the author uses it in a way that makes fun of or builds upon it, rather than just copying and pasting the cliché. Cons are that romance is kind of unrealistic, an indication that the author is inexperienced in that field. Character design: I like the characters. There are some that are black-and-white but there are hints that they'll get fleshed out in the future. Also WARNING this is a harem, but the girls exhibit different personality traits and are unique from each other. World background: This is the part where it's really just straight ripped off of other stories. Well, I can't say for certain since it's only in Chapter 39 and the world might get more interesting in the future, but so far it's bland and boring. Thanks for listening to my TEDTalk.
Good novel, has good potential although it would be better in my opinion if cultivation levels were different from each other... Characters behave differently from other cultivation novels; they are more realistic, so don't expect the "I heard you disrespected me so I will kill 9 generation of your family" type of character. Overall I recommend to read this novel, I hope that author doesn't drop this.
Why is this being slept on. Thanks for the chapters. There Fun , abit cliche but fun. Just one Quetion will the Mc have a harem and will Weiwei be a his lover. 140 charachters 140 charachters 140 charachters 140 charachters 140 charachters 140 charachters 140 charachters 140 charachters 140 charachters 140 charachters 140 charachters 140 charachters
This novel seems pretty solid and enjoyable to me. It is a shame that the author has dropped or abandoned this a couple years ago. I found it interesting and wanted to read much more. I know that authors almost never return to stories they have set aside for this long so my only regret is that I will never know how the story turns out.
Awesome lighthearted slice of life (atm). No r18 but mc's sexual relations are made clear (no japanese mc troupee). Very captivating writing where there is "nothing special". Romance, humor, COMMON SENSE, nice character interaction and no always looming catastrophe or destiny to run away from. Freakingly awesome writing with your everyday cultivation ingredients! Full 5/7. Cant say anything about updates cause binge. My only concern is mc's quite fast cultivation and opness-> too many times these destroy perfectly good and funny novels. Im hyped...
The first few chapters had made me smile and laughed for a few occasions. To tell you the truth, I rarely laughed and had fun reading novels with light themes. Take MGA where Chu Feng meets Wang Qiang for example, that part was the funniest of MGA chapters. Although I can’t consider this putting the story at the same place as Ultimate Scheming System or The Strongest System, the vibes are there and the author is doing great. I especially enjoyed reading it. For an original, it was rare to find this kind of novel, definitely a worthy novel to indulge your time on. Although I only read 20 chapters atm and felt that the fighting scene is not detailed and dull, I think it would be improved later on. Plotholes? I only see a few of those, but not too glaring. There is nothing to say with the stability of updates, 2 chapters per day, and the author even gives compensation chapter, who am I to complain? Anyways, for World Background, I don’t have a lot to say to the current chapter I have read which is chapter 20. At first, I thought the setting was a Xianxia, but then, I was completely wrong, and then in the following chapter, the setting had change into xuanhuan with a modern setting. The author had not yet explained how did they receive their powers from, or are the human's civilization changes after cultivation arrived in their world. So for World Development, I can’t say anything at the moment. So I give it five stars, but this might change as I further read the story. Character Design - I would rate it 4/5, to be honest. But since the web novel is still on the beginning part, I won’t be too harsh, and such, I would rate it 5/5 for what I have seen. Also, Writing Quality — Man, I don’t have anything to say. Although there were some passive words and a few mistakes, I don‘t really have an issue with it, since it’s really good and the mistakes were not glaring for me to rant about. Definitely, A 4.9/5, For the Writing Quality. Overall 5/5 review base of what I currently read— Chapter 20. The novel is pretty good, and the writing style even made it easier to read, and people would have not hard-time reading it, and even made you smile. So definitely a recommended novel.
IMO this is a pretty laidback story. Not a serious-type story. Knowing that its a fun story to read. At least it wont be a waste of time Its overall a good novel! Its overall a good novel! Its overall a good novel! Its overall a good novel! Its overall a good novel! Its overall a good novel! Its overall a good novel! Its overall a good novel!