Trapped in Time

This work is both relaxing and entertaining to read. With only five chapters out I wasn’t able to get a complete picture, but what I was able to read was promising. If I may give you some pointers? My apologies if you find them uncalled for, my intentions are good. Sometimes the writing needs some slight polishing. One of them: “Yes of course ma’am,” the personal secretary replied. “He has been waiting for you,” she added. I believe there is a pass in time before she adds ‘He has been waiting for you’? If not it can be perfectly written as; “Yes, of course ma’am,” the personal secretary replied, “he has been waiting for you.” But I assume there is a time pass (she walks trough the room for instance) my advice in these situations is to write - for example - this down; “Yes of course ma’am,” the personal secretary replied. She went back to typing before adding, “He has been waiting for you.” Another tip I hope to give you is to add less ‘she said’ or ‘he added’ in your dialogue. It’s unnecessary and tiring to your reader. Other small things like; retelling something (meaning you describe something happening and then write down it happening are also not always necessary) Example: After voicing all instructions like a bullet train, the principal told her that she‘s dismissed. “You may go now,” said the principal. These of course are all simply some small style changes that don’t deserve to called ‘real errors’. I hope you have a lot of fun continuing your work, keep going!

Although this book has only just started, I am very optimistic. The title is concise, but the content is not simple. The plot of the story is full of ups and downs, which fascinates people. I hope the author can persist in updating and bring good stories to more people.

This is quite an informative novel. I actually learn a lot. I even googled blue pine. Lol.. N they are beautiful.😅 Four chapters, we can see that it still at the introduction stage which is really cool for we get to know the main setting of "Trapped in time"(just an assumption). If author managed to exploit the botany+mystery this novel can be awesome. I'm looking forward to the next chapters. Ps:I feel like reading one of my fav manga 'cage of eden'.

Botany is my honours so i like it and the character is well described with actions and i like your grammar..... I can't wait to read further....do update chapter fast..Good luck and wish you best of luck

The novel seems to be an amazing story, with a promise of mystery later on. It is educative also and I am sure children will like to read it too.

Chapter# 2: It depicts the troublesome but noble job of a teacher. They are heroes who endures happily the different attitudes of every students. But I'm more excited of the role of the one who tagged along😄

This is still the first chapter but I can envision a lot of interesting plots most especially because it touches a topic about botany and camping. And camping is a wonderful adventure. I wish that during this time, the FL would meet the one who would give a whole new meaning of her life. 😊

I did not know where to write this. I need to inform my readers of this novel that I could not be online for some time as I was busy with my retirement from service. Now some repairs are going on in my house. Will try to write a few chapters this week. Sorry for the wait for chapters.