AmrutaShinde95
I could barely get through the first chapter, and in chapter 2, I decided that I couldn’t continue. I started reading since the summary sounded interesting, but the chapters are so full of errors that I couldn’t read story smoothly. The author does mention that English is not her first language though. There are a lot of sentences that are long and should be broken up, and each sentence felt more like I was reading a summary than a story. Those areas could have been used to showcase the character’s personality, provide more of an explanation between the sequence of events, and bring more depth to the story. Instesd, multiple pieces of information were bunched up together in one long sentence. It was giving me a headache and I kept stopping to try and make it make sense and correct errors. This story might have potential, but I can’t tell with all the errors.
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I used to read this kind of novel but with Chinese background😂but reading with indian name,culture etc are kinda refreshing haha but their names kinda hard to pronounce tho and quite confusing too idk is it only me but i think it’s quite normal as it also happened when i first reading Chinese novel. All in all, the storyline is good and realistic but i got bored halfway as I prefer overpowered FL or super good ML HAHAHAHA (fyi i dont like ML in this novel at first bcs i think he’s rude to FL and boring too) FL is nice tho i like the way she educate and communicate with her cubs💯👏🏻