Reviews of Transmigrating through harry potter
Transmigrating through harry potter
lela_Oswin
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well I got to say. im NOT one for female MCs but I really do like this fic. its not as exciting as what I usually read but it is still enjoyable. while im not HOOKED im defenitly reding whenever updates happen I just wont be checking it every day like ohers. I would give this fic a 6.9/10 and im fairly harsh of the fanfics I read. keep doing what your doing <3
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My book does not have enough reviews :(( but let me tell you what it is about. - girl gets the system and goes into harry potter and saves the lives of people who lived a tragedy. - in detail chapters and currently on arc two chap 6 - I will try to upload asap but I have been consistent until recently
I really love this fan fic good plot, good story deployment, and love where your going with it but. but I think it was really stupid to have her erase her feelings of that time cause that's a stupid thing to do, especially in the heat of the moment, feelings are something to be cherished, having her erase them instead of natural more on from them was a stupid thing to do.
Writing Quality: Average(good enough to be readable) Stability of updates: The pace at which chapters are released is stable. not sure about future. Story development: Each novel has its own story. You can say that each volume is a story of 1 of mc lives. Character development: Mc is a cold and calculating type of mc but it does not mean that she does not know how to feel emotions or get attached to people. At the same time, she is also ruthless and will do what it takes to complete her tasks(Tho what her limits are not shown yet) World Background: In this, you can that author gave proper thought to reactions mc action would bring to the world as a whole is created as logically possible as it could be in a magical world. Overall:- It's a great novel but still lacks in some aspects like some grammar problems. Grammar problems sometimes make things harder to understand. 1 thing I would like to add is that mc has memories from her previous reincarnations but forgets her emotions she felt in that life about people.
I dislike that Marie gets all this growth in the first arc and just me drugs it away. It would have been better if the emotion was temporarily locked away or had half the effect as you had written. Without the emotions of her time as Petunia, she will lose much of her character growth and the story development in the first arc will have been useless except for learning knowledge about the wizarding world.
j'adore très bonne histoire si tu veux des idées de personne a aider, il y a aussi Severus Rogue, la famille Malfoy ( Draco ), Dumbledore (avec sa sœur ), Professeur McGonagall (sa famille est morte je crois), Remus lupin (loup garou en général ), Astoria Greengrass (morte jeune a cause de la maladie du sang)
