LoveableChubby
Ah...I will never get tired of reading Author-san's BL novels no matter how many times~!! I just love the covers too...Did Author-san draw them? Or...I don't know! How are the covers so good?! Hehe. I do have to self-edit the chapters in my head sometimes but eh...who cares! The story is really fun and I just hope this novel won't drop!!!! Please make lots of updates too! If you do...I'll be your lifetime forever supporter as a reader...Though I actually already am...Haha. 🙏😄❤💎🌸🎈😄😄
I have to say, in the title of the novel is a word that complete describes all the novel in itself, INSANE!!!! Damm, leave the filrt and everything by the side, this is so cool, every character is different and cool in their own way. I love it, let me tell you, I am not a fan for bl novels, but reciently this is my third one hehehehe. Until now (in chapters twenties) there ir not mature content, and I like that, but I do not mind if I read some hehehehe
A lot of spelling errors that take away from the main plot and the characters feel kind of Mary Sue. I'm having trouble understanding what's going on-- which is due, in part, to the unnecessary capitalization of letters. The sentences don't flow properly, Ex(not from text): I would have wished if the thing if I could. Even when the sentences make grammatical sense the words keep looping. Looping words are a sign of a lack of editing or forethought when writing. The quality of the writing varies from paragraph-to-paragraph. The author is also most likely unpaid for their work. I do this not to be mean to the author but to offer a valid criticism of their work. Author there are various materials out there designed for grammar and word-flow practice, I suggest doing a quick google search if you're interested. Thank You- Reader
I apologize first for giving a review without even reading it yet but the cover draws me to check this one. When i read the synopsis i find it quite interesting but when i checked the status, it made me reluctant to proceed. Its just a pain for my heart to start something and left hanging. Wonder when will the respected author pick this up again?